Saturday, December 6, 2025

The Gift that Keeps on Giving: Books

 Hello Readers,

It's that time of year where we struggle to find just the right gift for picky people. Pen Dames is here to help--books! While Flossie, Barbara and I (Loretta) have written many novels in a variety of genres, we've decided to show case a few of our favorites for you. For your convenience, we have also included a buy link that will take you to our author sites. Enjoy!



Flossie Benton Rogers

Mystic adventurer who writes action-packed paranormal fantasy romances, historical romances, and cozy mysteries. Known for conjuring the magic with spirited stories. Fifth generation Floridian. Former library director and teacher. Essential Energy Balancing and Reiki master. Passionate about true love, mystical realms, mythology, astrotheology, arcane mysteries, and hidden realities. Coffee aficionado. Family time is the best time. Loves to hang out with myth, magic, and mayhem.



https://www.amazon.com/Wytchfae-Runes-Flossie-Benton-Rogers-ebook/dp/B07DYLXF6N/

BLURB:

Her warmth lured him from an icy hell…

Wytchfae Kelly O’Day’s job is to transition ghosts to the afterlife. The last thing she expects is to fall for one of them -- sexy Viking Ingvar Hrothson. Cursed to roam the earth as a restless spirit, Ingvar is hell bent to destroy the sorceress responsible. His war plan doesn’t include spending time with a bewitching flesh and blood woman like Kelly. With their attraction approaching supernova, the couple must battle sinister forces and masters of the dark arts. More than lives are at stake. Will hell give them a chance?



READER COMMENT:

Runes is a fantastic read. The melding of time periods is smooth. You become attached to the main characters, and you wish them to succeed in their quest. The hero and heroine are smart, attractive, and immensely likeable, and the various people and places they encounter are equally as fascinating. As a reader you feel involved in all their adventures.

EXCERPT:

Kelly had envisioned Helle, Goddess of the Underworld, as an Elvira type, but she turned out to be a flaxen-haired ice queen. The underworld itself seemed to contain more ice than fire, or at least the parts Kelly saw of it during the first half hour after she, Ingvar, and Hyge entered Helle’s domicile. Freezing, she bundled up in her cloak so desperately that she felt more like an Arctic pioneer than a southern gal. Then the scenery changed, glowing with the intensity of a Technicolor movie—gleaming whites and vivid greens, blues, and reds. It looked the opposite of the Grims’ grey abode, and it smelled like jasmine.

No one had met her, Ingvar, and Hyge at the entrance, and they walked and explored for some time without encountering anyone. Kelly wondered if she needed to call out or use a spell to get Helle’s attention. Then they came to a strange sight, a bubbling fire lake surrounded by banks of snow. In the middle of the lake and standing on the surface of the tongues of flame stood a stunning Nordic vision.

Kelly stopped, mesmerized. There was no doubt in her mind this was Helle, Goddess of the Underworld.

The woman’s eyes glowed silver. “Who are you and what do you want here?”

Ingvar stepped forward. “Goddess Helle, I am Ingvar, a North Man. These are my friends Kelly and Hyge. I have reason to believe my sister is here. We have come a long way to see her and to ask for your help in restoring her to our family.”

“I know of you, Viking. I am aware of my sister’s curse that prevented your rightful rest. By what magic are you in my domain?”

Kelly dipped her head in reverence. “Goddess, my magic brought us here with the help of the Guardians of the Directions. Also, the goddess Epona is a friend of mine and encouraged the Guardian of the Between to allow us through his portal.”

“Ahh,” Helle’s all-business tone took on shades of curiosity. “Is Epona back with Eshigel? I had not heard.”

Kelly shrugged. “They are not shouting at one another.”

“Progress, then. Follow me into my dwelling, and I will hear your appeal. I warn you, the cost of reversing death is high.”

“Where are all the people?” Kelly could not help asking as they followed behind Helle, trudging through the snow toward the lake of fire.

“You shall see. Come, do not fear the flames.” Helle lifted her hand, and the fire abated to mere flickers.

When they had made their way to the middle, the tiny flames danced toward the outskirts of the lake, revealing descending stone steps. When Kelly would have stepped down, Ingvar grasped her arm and gently thrust her behind him. Kelly smiled to herself. He was  a chivalrous Viking.



Barbara Cairns
Barbara is a New Englander who has traveled extensively and lived in Labrador, Canada; Bamberg, Germany, and the Cana Zone, Panama, both as a teacher and elementary school principal. As the author of twelve books in different genres, she has two goals in her writing: to entertain and to educate. Her past books have ranged from picture books, middle grade, YA, and adult novels, as well as historical fiction, which is her favorite.



JACOB JOINS THE COW CAVALRY

Blurb: It’s the last yar of the Civil War, and fifteen-year-old Jacob Donner is chomping at the bit to be part of it. while his father is away fighting for the Confederacy in Virginia, Floridda-born Jacob is too young to enlist. With his herd-roundup skills, trained dog Zoey, and trusted horse Ashes, Jacob cannot be stopped. Encountering many adventures on the cattle trail, Jacob morphs from boy to man, and his transition is touching, exciting to read, and impossible to put down.

Excerpt: On the way to Ocala, Jacob drove the wagon past inviting countryside. Lush, thick growth of trees and foliage had him thinking of days before the war, days of traveling in the wagon with Ma and Pa and his siblings for a picnic…not as far away as Ocala, but the same tranquil, unspoiled rural landscape.

But soon those nostalgic memories reverted to the present. Jacob’s mind raced. What will I find at the end of this trip? He gritted his teeth as his attention strayed from the pastoral scenery and focused on Pa’s curt note. Why didn’t Pa tell us more? Was it cuz he couldn’t afford a longer telegram? When Jacob realized how fast they were traveling, he slowed and said, “Sorry, Nellie. We have a long way to go, so don’t want to tire y’all out.”

By the time they’d reached hallway, Jacob stopped for water and fed some carrots to Nellie. “Good girl, Nellie. Pa will be happy to see y’all as always.”

Jacob’s senses heightened when he thought about seeing his father after so many years. He longed to hear his thunderous voice, which seemed to project to the next town, especially when Pa was excited. Will he retain that sweaty smell that he always had after a long day working in the field? Jacob imagined his father’s usual shiny, bright eyes dulled by his wartime experiences. Will I make Pa uncomfortable if I stare at his wooden leg?

As Jacob neared Ocala, the miles of forest had him on the lookout for black bears, especially those with cubs. He thought, Nellie’s a peck a trouble when she starts a kickin’, but she’s no match for s mother bear. No bears today, though.

Jacob had been to Ocala twice before with Pa, and then once with the Cow Calvary. Despite the war ruins in the city, Jacob spotted the post office in the distance. his heartbeats drummed away in his chest as Nellie brought the wagon closer. Then Jacob turned Nellie to the side of the building. there, standing in a grassy area under a tree stood Pa’s horse, Buck. Next to the horse, a thin man leaned into the horse as if for support.

As Jacob trotted Nellie nearer, Jacob gazed open-mouthed. Is that really Pa? the man in front of him had a much longer beard than Pa’s. he wore a Confederate uniform, but it hung so loose that it reminded Jacob of Ma wearing one of Pa’s old shirts.

Jacob pulled on the reins and tried to stop Nellie. But the mule whinnied and pulled forward. Jacob yanked harder. “Whoa.” And Nellie halted. Then Jacob shouted, “Pa, is that you?” He jumped off the wagon. Nellie moved forward and whinnied again.

The man turned around slowly. In a soft voice, he said, “Yes, Jacob. This is your ol’ Pa. It’s been a long haul from ol’ Virginny.

Readers Comments: Barbara Cairns’s latest book reveals much about the time in which he lived. It is a book rich in history, with the sounds, smells, dialect, and wants and needs of families and their young amidst traumatically changing times. I recommend it highly.


Loretta C. Rogers
When asked why she writes in different genres, Loretta doesn't mind telling readers that she lets the characters inside her head tell their own story. From Old West lawmen to Contemporary rival drug cartels, to haunting paranormalism, Loretta crafts the plot. She calls it, 'getting out of the way,' and letting creativity take over. This is why her tagline is: Stories with a Twist...Expect the Unexpected.


Blurb 

Soured on Christmas and love, famed model Addison James returns to the only home she ever knew, Hope Ranch, a home for foster kids, to heal from a near-fatal accident and a broken heart. Falling in love again is not part of Addison’s plan—not until she meets cute and motherless six-year-old twins, and a handsome sheriff.

Sheriff Wade Grey’s philosophy for love is once burned is enough to last a lifetime. Friction sparks as he and Addison butt heads the first time they meet. Yet falling for her is so tempting.

As Christmas approaches, there appears to be hope for love with a generous sprinkle of surprises.

 

Excerpt

Her head was spinning. This was not a sensation she enjoyed. “My heart was ripped to shreds by Rowan…he mangled my soul and then had the audacity to laugh. So, you’ll forgive me if I’ve closed the door on my trust department. I won’t be your latest fling.”

He snarled. “My latest…what the hell are you talking about?”

“Oh, don’t play coy, Wade, the other night when you kissed me you called me Gracie. She must be some deep, dark secret. Even Nell wouldn’t talk about her when I asked.”

When he didn’t answer, Addison arched a brow. “Whoever she is, I won’t compete with her, and I won’t let you use me to hurt her.” Her heart was knocking against her ribs.

Casually he lifted her hand to kiss the palm. “It’s not what you think, Addison.”

She harrumphed. “No, it never is.”

He stepped forward and she stepped back. The lines that bracketed his mouth might have been carved with a knife. “Things are a bit hectic especially with Friday being Freddie’s last day. I’ll be in touch.”

Her lips formed into a thin smile. She strode to the porch and up the steps. She turned back and watched the cruiser disappear down the long driveway.

 Reader’s Comment: A perfect, uplifting story for the Holiday Season. I loved the small-town setting and the wonderful characters who triumphed over huge obstacles. If you need a little hope right now, this is the book for you.


Until we meet again, dear readers,



Tuesday, November 4, 2025

Author Interview with Maxim W. Furek

Welcome to the Pen Dames November 2025 blog! This month we're interviewing talented paranormal author Maxim W. Furek. Leave a comment on this blog for a chance to win a print copy of his book, The Smurl Haunting: When Ed and Lorriane Came to Town.


The Smurl Haunting: When Ed and Lorriane Came to Town

by Maxim W. Furek

The TRUE story behind Conjuring: Last Rites and the perfect post-Halloween read!!! The Smurl Haunting: When Ed and Lorraine Came to Town, is a modern-day Amityville Horror and accurate account of demonic infestation in West Pittston, Pennsylvania. 

Paranormal author Maxim Furek was there! He was personal friends with Ed and Lorraine Warren and met Dan Rivera two days before his untimely death. Published by Chicago’s Anxiety Press, this book reignites the debate over good and evil, the Rite of Exorcism, and fight against demonic forces. What happened in Gettysburg during the “Devils on the Run Tour?” Was Annabelle responsible for Rivera’s death?  Read this book and come to your own conclusions—and then go and see Conjuring: Last Rites on the big screen. 


What can you tell us that will allow us to get to know you better—where you live, your background, jobs, interests, etc.?

My wife, Pat and I, have been snowbirds for eight seasons. We spend summers in Pennsylvania and winters in Hernando, Florida. I’m a former psychologist and was in charge of a drug and alcohol rehabilitation program. I’m a former rock journalist and current paranormal author.  I’ve written nine books, with seven different publishers.

What books were your favorites as a child? 

Science fiction, Bomba the Jungle Boy, Hardy Boys, comic books and Classics Illustrated which introduced me to HG Wells, Robert Louis Stevenson, and many of the great authors.

What genre is your book? What do you like about writing in that genre?

Paranormal, or supernatural themes. They fascinate me for the mystery and my need to comprehend the unknown. I share that curiosity with many others.

What inspires you to write? 

I’m not sure, but when the bug hits, it consumes and takes over and drives me to write and write and write until the project is completed. I love the process and I love the conclusion. 

What writing projects do you have on the horizon? 

I’m attempting to write a psychological thriller. My first attempt at fiction. So far, I’ve created a few characters and, dialogue, and interactions. It’ a bit harder than writing non-fiction.

What is your best advice for aspiring writers? 

Read everything that you can. Discuss writing and promotional techniques with other writers.

What is your favorite book marketing tip? 

You have be a social extrovert and make connections. That’s the key to promoting your books.

What do you like to do when not writing? 

Exercise, walking, biking, swimming. Playing guitar. Attending concerts. Hanging out with friends. Travel.

Thank you for letting Pen Dames readers learn more about you, Maxim. Best of luck with your psychological thriller, and let us know when it's published! 

Connect with Maxim W. Furek on his author WEBSITE.


Friday, October 17, 2025

Pen Dames Pointers! Tips to Jazz Up Your Writing! 2025-10-17

 


A passion of Pen Dames is to help other writers by sharing tips and insights we have learned along the way. We hope you will find the pointers beneficial to your writing process.



The Author’s Support System

Katherine Eddinger Smits

If you’re new to the writing world, you may have heard terms like beta reader, critique partner, or developmental editor. Maybe you’ve wondered what all this jargon means. So, let’s define these roles and discuss how different people can help authors shape a book.

                                                 I Don't Know Panda

Readers Who Help Writers

Critique Partners (CPs)
Usually fellow writers, critique partners swap pages of their WIP (Work in Progress) and give each other feedback. The writing doesn’t have to be polished—CPs are most useful for spotting big-picture issues like pacing, plot holes, and character arcs. They may or may not read the full manuscript, but when they do, it’s usually in chunks over weeks or months.

Alpha Readers
These are trusted friends or family who get the very first peek, often at a rough draft or right after early revisions. They read the whole story and let the author know if it’s working on a basic level.

Beta Readers
Beta readers are fans of the genre who read the full manuscript before publication. Their job is to flag places where the story drags, confuses them, or pulls them out. Some also leave early reviews. They might be friends, newsletter subscribers, or found through paid services that connect authors with betas.

ARC Readers
ARC (Advance Review Copy) readers receive the book right before publication and agree to provide an honest review. Like betas, they’re usually genre fans, but they see the book after editing is done. Some join through review services; others come straight from an author’s reader list.

                                                  Reading cartoon bee

Editors Who Polish the Story

Developmental Editors
These editors look at the big picture—story structure, character arcs, pacing, and major plot issues.

Copy (or Line) Editors
Copy editors focus on the details, sentence by sentence. They correct grammar, punctuation, and style, and check for POV errors, timeline problems, or inconsistent descriptions.

Proofreaders
The final set of eyes before publication. Proofreaders catch typos, punctuation issues, and formatting problems that slipped through earlier rounds.

                                     Friendship Doggo

Teamwork Shapes the Story

Publishing isn’t a solo act. Whether you go indie or traditional, a whole network of readers, editors, and designers help bring a book from first draft to finished copy.

Are you surprised by how many people contribute to a single book? If you’re new to writing, I hope this clears up some of the jargon. What other writing terms trip you up? Share them in the comments, and Pen Dames will tackle them in a future Pointer!


Crutch Words

Loretta C. Rogers

Crutch words—what are they and why it is important to avoid them as much as possible. Crutch words are filler words that both veteran and novice writers’ overuse. These particular words add nothing meaningful to the story.

These include words such as: “and,” “well,” “but,” “so” and “you know,” but also mere sounds like “ah,” “um” and “er.” Sometimes they include words such as “literally,” “actually” and “basically.”

Writers tend to use crutch words or phrases out of habit. Be aware that they can hinder the clarity and impact of your writing, making your prose sound repetitive or amateurish.

How to avoid crutch words:

  • Read Aloud: Reading your writing aloud can help you identify awkward phrasing and filler words more easily than reading silently.
  • Slow Down: When writing, giving yourself more time to choose words carefully can help you avoid resorting to catch words as filler.
  • Practice: Consciously focus on eliminating crutch words while writing
  • Use Stronger Vocabulary: Replace weak words and qualfiers (like "very" or "really) with more precise and impactul language. For example, instead of saying "walked very fast," use "hurried" or rushed".
  • Edit and Proofread: Review your writing specifically for crutch words and eliminate or replace them where possible.

    Remember: It's not about eliminating every single instance of these words, but rather being mindful of their overuse and replacing them with more impactful alternatives when appropriate.



    Overcome the Grocery List!

    Barbara Cairns

    Strategies to overcome the Grocery List, which is just a list of adjectives or attributes.

    Ex: It was a bright, sunny, hot summer day.

    Give each adjective its own descriptive sentence.

    "bright" = I shielded my eyes from the bright afternoon sunshine.

    "sunny"= There was not a cloud in the sky, and the sun burned stronger than ever.

    "hot"    = I wiped the sweat from my forehead as I looked for a shady spot to rest.

    (Examples are from Super-Story- Writing Strategies & Activities by Barbara Mariconda and Dee Paoletta Auray.)



    Four Act Structure

    Flossie Benton Rogers

    Story structure or plot structure is the framework by which a writer organizes the elements of a story. Aristotle’s Poetics started everything off with the assertion that poetry and drama must have a beginning, middle, and end. These segments frame the conflict as it starts, rises to a climax, and falls. The beginning, middle, and end can also be termed Setup, Confrontation, and Resolution. These large segments of the framework, moving the story along through different stages, are sometimes called Acts.

    Another common method of story structure, which is not much different from the Three Act Structure, is the Four Act Structure. This is a basic format for screenwriting. It divides the middle section (usually 50% of the book) into two equal 25% sections. The Four Act Structure is particularly useful for avoiding a sagging middle.

    The segments of the Four Act Structure are called by different names. The Novel Smithy divides the four acts into the following stages: Setup, Struggle, Pursuit, and Conclusion. The Japanese story structure, Kishōtenketsu, divides the acts into Introduction, Development, Twist, and Conclusion. Other writers use different names, such as:

    Setup, Response, Attack, Resolution

    Exposition, Rising Action, Falling Action, Resolution

    Set Up, Build, Build Faster, Resolve

    Conflict Starts, Rising Action, Final Push, Conflict Ends

    My particular favorite is: Setup, Reaction, Proaction, and Resolution. In Part One, Setup, the first 25% of the book, we learn the main ingredients of the story, including protagonist, antagonist, goal, conflict, setting, etc. In Part Two, Reaction, the protagonist responds to the forces around him and is often uncertain about how to proceed or achieve the goal. In Part Three, Proaction, the protagonist is more proactive and assertive. Despite failures and setbacks, he takes action and moves forward more insistently toward a final, high-stakes show down. Part Four, Resolution, gives us a chance to see the result of the protagonist’s actions. In a book with a positive ending, we see a restoration of balance and the new, improved normal of the protagonist.

    The Four Act Structure:

    helps keep the pacing on track, 

    helps the writer maintain clarity as the story moves along, 

    helps in the development of distinct character arcs for each section, 

    helps sustain consistent tension and suspense throughout the whole.

    What large organizational structure do you use when writing? When breaking the story down further, have you organized by the plot point method called story beats? That is a topic that Pen Dames Pointers will address in the future!

    Did any of these ideas resonate with you? Let us know, and also tell us of any writing questions you have and topics you’d like us to cover in future Pointers.
    Thanks for stopping by, and happy writing! Cheers from the Pen Dames.


    Tuesday, August 12, 2025

    Pen Dames Pointers! Tips to Jazz Up Your Writing! 2025-8-12

     


    A passion of Pen Dames is to help other writers by sharing tips and insights we have learned along the way.  Katherine Eddinger Smits presents an extraordinary Author's Toolkit.  




    An Author’s Toolkit: 20 Resources to Rely On!

    This month, I’m sharing 20 of my go-to resources for authors—including blogs, organizations, tools, and podcasts. These are things I use and love in my daily writing life. Most are free, offer a free tier, or are affordable.

    Whether you're just starting your writing journey or already multi-published, there’s something here to make your path smoother and your process easier.

    Here they are in alphabetical order:


    1. AllAuthor

    The entire idea of AllAuthor is based upon bringing authors and readers together on a simple, direct and interactive platform.

    I’ve had an AllAuthor account since my first book. The paid plan gives you cool tools like a review GIF maker (great for sharing blurbs), automated tweets, and weekly cover mockups. If you’re unpublished, you can join as a reader for free.


    2. ALLi – Alliance of Independent Authors

    A global membership association empowering writers to create great books, reach more readers, and build successful publishing businesses.

    I’m not a member yet—but I plan to join soon. Even without membership, their newsletter is packed with industry news and updates.


    3. AutoCrit

    Empowering writers with the knowledge, connections, and tools to improve their skills and manuscripts.

    AutoCrit is a powerhouse editing tool. Even the free plan offers helpful insights. I’m using it now to revise my sixth novel—starting with a full manuscript analysis and now working chapter by chapter. Among other things, it highlights passive voice, filler words, adverbs, clichés, and my biggest issue: repetition.


    4. BookFunnel

    Delivers 2+ million ebooks monthly and offers secure downloads for readers.

    Great for group promos and reader magnets, BookFunnel makes downloads easy on any device and even helps readers troubleshoot.


    5. Canva

    Design, generate, and print anything.

    I used Canva’s excellent free tier for years before upgrading to Pro, which I now use almost daily for social media graphics, blog visuals, and even early cover concepts.


    6. Delilah Devlin

    Award-winning author of erotic romance and editor extraordinaire.

    Delilah blogs daily and welcomes guest posts—perfect exposure for authors. She also edited my two indie novels and is a joy to work with.


    7. Dawné Dominique – Dusk Till Dawn Designs

    Professionally designed book covers that bring your vision to life.

    Dawné is my cover designer and a true artist. She’s also an author, so she “gets” writers on every level.


    8. Fictionary

    Helping fiction writers turn drafts into compelling stories.

    Fictionary’s story arc visualizer compares your manuscript to classic story structure. There’s a free plan and trial for premium features.


    9. Florida Writers Association

    Membership benefits include a conference, awards, critique groups, publications, and more.

    I’ve been a proud member for 10 years. I’ve judged both their Collections contest and the Royal Palm Literary Awards, which offer detailed, rubric-based feedback—a mini developmental edit. You don’t have to live in Florida to join!


    10. Foundations Books

    Helping authors publish with professionalism and heart.

    This is my publisher! They’re a small press open to agented and unagented authors. If accepted, you’ll receive personalized guidance through every step.


    11. Hidden Gems

    Known for ARC and beta reader programs, but I love their weekly blog. It covers everything from craft to marketing in a friendly, insightful way.


    12. Jane Friedman

    Electric Speed newsletter: Digital tools and publishing insights every two weeks.

    Jane’s newsletter is free and packed with pro-level industry advice. She’s an expert worth following.


    13. Joanna Penn – The Creative Penn

    A weekly podcast for writing, publishing, and book marketing.

    I never miss an episode—Joanna offers practical tips and interviews on all aspects of writing life.


    14. K.M. Weiland

    Blogger and author of top-tier writing guides.

    Her blog dives deep into structure and character arcs. I often refer to her breakdowns of story beats and themes.


    15. Kobo Writing Life Podcast

    Interviews with bestselling authors and publishing pros.

    I listen during my daily walks—each episode is packed with insights for self-publishing success.


    16. Marketing for Romance Writers (MFRWIO)

    A helpful networking group that supports authors at all levels.

    You can ask for advice or just learn by lurking. It’s not limited to romance writers either—any fiction author will benefit.


    17. ProWritingAid

    Another fantastic editing tool like AutoCrit or Fictionary. The free version is robust, and the paid one is even better.


    18. September C. Fawkes

    Award-winning blog on writing craft by a freelance editor and coach.

    Her posts are incredibly detailed and insightful. If you want to level up your writing, her blog is a must-read.


    19. The Kill Zone Blog (TKZ)

    A daily blog by thriller and suspense writers on craft, marketing, and publishing.

    I read TKZ a day late just to catch the lively comments. It’s consistently engaging and useful across genres.


    20. Writers Helping Writers

    Free site by the creators of the Thesaurus Collection and One Stop for Writers.

    Their articles, worksheets, and tools are game changers. I especially love their Emotion Thesaurus and timeline features.

     

    Final Thoughts

    Every one of these resources has helped me in some way—from crafting better scenes to marketing my books. I hope they help you too.

    Which ones do you use? Got a favorite I didn’t list? Share it in the comments—I’m always looking for new tools to try!

     

    The Gift that Keeps on Giving: Books

      Hello Readers, It's that time of year where we struggle to find just the right gift for picky people. Pen Dames is here to help--books...