Saturday, December 7, 2024

'Tis the Season...

 

All I Want for Christmas is…

Have you ever wondered why books make the best Christmas gifts?

1.     Books aren’t perishable.

2.     The best stories never grow old.

3.     A book is pretty much a gift for life.

4.     Books are the gift that keep on giving.

To help with your selection we have a few suggestions:



Witch Trial Legacy

by Katherine Eddinger Smits

Buy link: https://amzn.to/4aHgOUE

Sybilla Sanborn must break a centuries old curse before everything she cares about goes up in smoke.

Sybilla is a nurse gifted with the ability to heal with her touch but cursed with visions of future tragedies she cannot prevent because no one heeds her warnings. With help from the mediums of the spiritualist town of Cassadaga, Florida, she learns she is descended from both the first person executed for witchcraft in this country and the man who accused her.

Conn Ahern is an Iraq war vet dealing with pain and PTSD while working as a paramedic and struggling to save the ranch his grandmother founded. He’s an atheist who wants nothing to do with the people of the town.

When Conn and Sybilla meet, sparks fly, but not always in a good way, and their relationship fans the flames of jealousy and revenge in someone who doesn’t want them to work things out.

                                                            Runes (Wytchfae 1)

                                                   by Flossie Benton Rogers   


Buy link: Amazon.com: Runes (Wytchfae Book 1) eBook : Benton Rogers, Flossie: Kindle Store

Wytchfae Kelly O’Day’s job is to transition ghosts to the afterlife. The last thing she expects is to fall for one of them -- sexy Viking Ingvar Hrothson. Cursed to roam the earth as a restless spirit, Ingvar is hell bent to destroy the sorceress responsible. His war plan doesn’t include spending time with a bewitching flesh and blood woman like Kelly. With their attraction approaching supernova, the couple must battle sinister forces and master manipulators of the unholy dark arts. More than lives are at stake. Will hell give them a chance?


Echoes of the Moon
by Jennifer Taylor

Bethan Owen would give her life for her identical twin. With the care of Elunid’s troubled mind resting on her shoulders, she knows the love of a man will never be possible. But she can’t fight her attraction to the mystifying Henry Stephens, who, despite his lowly occupation as a night soil man, captivates her with his courtly manners and vitality.
Henry’s entire life revolves around building a fulfilling life for his mentally challenged son. When the vibrant and beautiful Bethan captures his heart, his world changes, but the secrets he harbors remain. Will he be able to give himself completely to the one he loves?
When Elunid’s behavior becomes more unstable, she makes a vicious enemy. Bethan is forced to make the greatest sacrifice, exchanging her life for her sister’s. Can Henry save Bethan and keep their love alive? Or will the dangerous adversary destroy all that is dear to them both?





Bitter Autumn
by Loretta C. Rogers


Flame-haired Birdie Mae Dix has no idea what tomorrow will bring. Kidnapped by the Pawnee and traded to the Comanche, she is now in the custody of the US Cavalry.  After eighteen years of loss and cruelty, she trusts no one; not even the handsome captain who’s piercing blue glare fills her with apprehension…and unwanted desire.

Pledging his life to a military career, years of war has hardened Captain Ford Thackery. He swore never to consider a life with a wife and children until he rescues an emerald-eyed, half-starved beauty. He knows he must earn Birdie’s trust as well as find a way into her heart.

Abducted by a renegade Pawnee cavalry scout, Birdie once again finds herself a captive. If he can’t possess her then no one will.



As we gather for another holiday season, whatever you celebrate, Pen Dames wish you, peace, happiness, love, and a prosperous New Year!


Thursday, November 7, 2024

Author Interview with Paula J. Braley

 

         November Greetings to all you Pen Dames Readers!

        You're in for a real treat this month with a visit from Paula J. Braley, who also writes as P.J. Braley. Today, we're featuring her stand-alone book, but also part of a series, 

FINDING PERSEPHONE


               BOOK BLURB

                 Caroline Taylor is very good at pretending.

                The polished surface of her life appears perfect until the morning when a smitten grad student brings the cracks in her illusions into sharp focus. No longer willing to live a lie, Caroline's journey of transformation sets her on a collision course with Dr. Grant Gates. Blinded by his quiet power, good looks, and impressive credentials, Caroline fails to see that Grant is also very good at pretending.

                Created from flesh and fire, Grant has a past he would like to forget, an assignment he cannot reveal, and a forbidden obsession with his newest client whose beautiful eyes miss nothing. As the enforcer of an underground brotherhood, he must protect their secrets at any cost, but Grant is determined that Caroline will not become his next victim. Striking a devil's bargain to keep the woman he has been searching for safe from his brothers' plans, Grant struggles to hide who - and what- he is until he becomes her only hope of escape . . . but will he let her go?

                There's not a chance in Hell.

                A contemporary retelling of the Greek myth of Hades and Persephone with a conflicted yet compelling male protagonist and a voice-driven narrative from the woman's perspective. Finding Persephone is the twisting tale of an alien assassin's search for mercy and the woman whose love lies at the heart of his redemption.

Short Excerpt

            "It's dreaming time," I said.

            "I don't understand."

            "Early evening. It's my favorite time of day. . . I call it dreaming time. The day hasn't surrendered the light, the night hasn't quite conquered the day. It's best in the summer, when it lasts for hours, lots of dreaming time."

            "What do you dream of Caroline?"

            "What did I use to dream of, or what do I dream of now?"

            "You dream differently now?"

            "Oh yes," I said, smiling slightly. "Before I dreamt of how wonderful it would be if Dan came home and just once said, "Hey sweetheart, what would you like to do tonight?" and I would imagine the things we would do together. . . silly things, romantic things, you know, just sharing the joy of each other in the ease of half-light. But, you know," I swallowed back sudden tears, "he never did."

            "Fool, then, to have missed one moment with you."

            "No, blind. He never wanted me in his life, only my role in it. It hasn't been a marriage so much as a semi-successful stage play."

            He held my hand next to his eyes. "And now?" he asked.

            I turned my palm next to his face. "I don't have to dream it, Grant. I live it." I brought my lips just close enough to him to feel their warmth.

            "Grant, will you do me a favor?"

            "If I can."

            "Tell me when it's okay to love you," I said softly. "I don't want to miss one moment of you."


What's your writing space like?

                Just imagine the messiest stacks of books, papers, and random dog toys all squished together in a bay window, and you've got it!

Do you wish to donate one of your e-book titles to a randomly selected winner?

                I would be happy to donate both The Fire Slayers and Finding Persephone to either one or two winners.    

What can you tell us about YOU that will allow us to get to know you better-- where you live, your background, jobs, interests, etc.?

                I live in Inverness, Florida, where my husband, Jim, and I moved after we retired.  Unfortunately, our plans clashed with COVID-19, which made everything more difficult. To complicate matters further, Jim was diagnosed with cancer, and the logistics of not only moving, but also his healthcare, became my sole responsibility. It was the hardest year of my life. Jim passed away about eight months after we moved into our new home, so I have spent most of the last two years forging new friendships.    .                                                                                                                                                   Soon after our move to inverness, I was blessed with finding Citrus Writers - a group of wonderful, kind, and patient writers who were helpful and encouraging at a time in my life when I didn't care if I ever wrote another word.  The last twenty-five years of my administrative career, I was the Senior assistant to the Director of the International Studies Program at the University of Dayton. While I worked there, I finished my B.A. and went on to earn a master's degree in English. It had always been my plan to write, and one day, I realized I could put it off no longer. Luckily, I took a lot (really, a lot) of writing classes at U.D., and with the feedback I received from my professors, I felt prepared to transition into a second career as a writer.                                                                                       

     My first book, The Fire Slayers, was published by Between the Lines Publishing at the height of COVID in November 2020. My second novel, Finding Persephone, was published just after we moved to Inverness in June 2022. I am happy to add that the third book, Persephone's Children, will be released in mid-November, 2024. I also have two manuscripts (book four of the Fire Slayers series and a stand-alone about 1940s, Tampa) that will be released next year.  I love living in Central Florida, and when I'm not writing, socializing, or working with the wonderful authors at Citrus Writers of Florida, I am either reading, having tea with friends, playing with my two rescue mini Aussies, Nymeria and Kaela, and counting my blessings.   

      What genre is your book? What do you like about writing in that genre?   

             The Fire Slayers series is a science fiction love story that explores the different sides of love, such as romantic love and family love, and how they contrast with duty and responsibility. The eternal struggle between deciding whether to follow your heart or your mind -- and the results of those choices.  Writing science fiction is a good fit for me for a couple of reasons. One is research. I love researching subjects I have never read about before and have found many of them endlessly fascinating. In The Fire Slayers, I learned about the geography and people who live in Northern Africa; I researched the bloodlines and history of Arabian horses, and the traditional clothes people who lived in the Levant wore in the 1980s. While writing Finding Persephone, I learned about genomes, testing, and anatomy.  Those are not the main reasons, however. I chose science fiction because it is the best genre to represent my theme: how other species see climate change, the proliferation of nuclear weapons, and the growing human population. I expanded on that theme by creating a secret underground alien society that is (one) fully aware of the fate of the planet if the current course is not corrected, and (two) are not afraid to do something about changing the future. Another reason I like writing science fiction instead of fantasy, for example, is because genre relies on scientific facts to carry the narrative and not enchanted elements or superpowers. This reliance on facts lends, I believe, a certain validity to the theme.

Is your book part of a series or a stand-alone? If it is a part of a series, briefly describe the series.

          Although written as stand-alone books, The fire Slayers, Finding Persephone, and  Persephone's Children are all part of the Fire Slayers series and can be read in any order. Two additional novels, tentatively titled Training Ground and The Retribution, are in final draft form for a total of five. The sixth one is percolating in my mind . . .  but not much has been written yet. The overall narrative of the series tells the story of the three main characters. Novels one through three describes the life of the protagonist/villain, Grant, an alien assassin who tries to balance the love of his human parents and his responsibility to his alien brotherhood; books two through four focus on Caroline, the human woman he loves, and the lengths to which Grant will go to protect her freedom; and three through five describe their son's tumultuous life from his untimely birth to adulthood as a soldier with a human wife amid an alien apocalypse. So, although written as a series, it can also be read as three overlapping trilogies.

Describe your main character -- life, personality, motivation -- whatever you think will make us want to get to know the person.

            In Finding Persephone, Grant seems to personify Shakespeare's "plain-dealing villain," a man who kills without negotiation, mercy, or compassion. It is hard to defend an assassin -- or is it? Although many villains are one-dimensional killing machines, Grant is much more complicated than the word may imply. Plagued by physical and emotional pain from his past (The Fire Slayers), Grant believes the only way to overcome his unending regret is to focus on his new assignment: protecting the colony's secrets by any means necessary.  When Grant falls in love with Caroline, he tries to reclaim what little humanity he has left to become worthy of her, and his attempt at metamorphosis endangers both of their lives. The only thing that keeps Grant from becoming the definitive villain his past would dictate is the price he is willing to pay to save Caroline from his brothers' plans.     

                What writing projects do you have on the horizon?

           As I mentioned earlierTraining Ground  will be released next year as the fourth book in The Fire Slayer  series. It's about the trials and joys of raising four alien children in the Midwest. The narrative is mostly epistolary, told with letters, journal entries, documents, and various vignettes over a period of twenty-five years. Writing in this style was new to me and Training Ground was the hardest book of the series to write because, although it is told primarily from Caroline's point of view, the story is interspersed with different voices. I found keeping everyone's voice progressing in a continuous narrative without branching into digression very challenging.   

   What is your best advice for aspiring writers?

           My advice for aspiring writers is to read as much as possible, write whenever you can, and get feedback. Lots of feedback -- and not from your mom or best friend. Moms and best friends are great for brainstorming ideas, but most do not understand a narrative or character arc, subtext, or world-building. The kind of feedback I refer to comes from professors, other writers, and editors. It is important to grow as a writer, so take classes, join writers' groups like the Citrus Writers of Florida, or the Florida Writers Association, and put your writing out there.

Which authors/books are on your keeper shelves?

            The books I will keep forever are mostly classics from Jane Austin (Sense and Sensibility is my favorite.), Charlotte Bronte's Jane Eyre (which I have reread many times), and early 20th century novels written by F. Scott Fitzgerald, Ernest Hemingway, and Marjorie Kinnan Rawlings. Those novels sound very staid, but on the other hand, I have every book written by John D. MacDonald, Dave Barry, Tim Dorsey, and Carl Hiassen; they are all occasionally sexy, always humorous, and sometimes downright irreverent! As a Florida native, I cannot help but be a fan of Florida fiction.

 If you could meet any author, living or dead, who would it be and why?

            Desiderious Erasmus of Rotterdam (1466-1536) is well known as the heart, soul, and pen of the Renaissance. Erasmus was one of the first humanists, a monk, a priest, a scholar, a writer, a teacher, the scourge of the Catholic Church -- and its ardent defender -- and his arguments with Martin Luther regarding the concept of free will are legendary (see more at https://pjbraley.com/hello-world/writers-words/erasmus-  es/).  What, you may ask, would we talk about? We would speak of the love and layers of language. Erasmus was a linguist who loved language so much that when he completed his first Latin translation of the New Testament, he continued to research church documents to ensure that his translation was as accurate as possible so that the scholars who came after him would have the best source for translations into common languages such as English, French, and German.  Among many other academic, intellectual, and spiritual pursuits, Desiderious Erasmus spent a lifetime searching for the best words and phrases and wrote with future readers in mind. I think we would begin our conversation there.                                  

What is your favorite marketing tip?

           I have only one marketing tip: never shy away from an opportunity to get your work, your name, or your brand out in front of the reading public's eye. I know you would rather be writing than talking about writing, but regrettably, the days are gone when writers can ignore the importance of every promotion opportunity. Remember, even Stephen King has an X (formerly Twitter) account.

Your website/blog and social media links ---

http://pjbraley.com

@pjbraley

paulajbraley@gmail.com

https://www.facebook.com/PJBraleyAuthor

Buy links for your featured book ---

https://www.amazon.com/stores/P.J.Braley/author/B08MZ3WVNN?ref=ap_rdr&isDramIntegrated=true&shoppingPortalEnabled=true

 Thank you so much, Paula, for taking time to join us at Pen Dames.

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  

                                                                                                                                           

Sunday, October 20, 2024

                                                       

                                           AUTHOR INTERVIEW WITH CHERIE COLYER


Greetings, Pen Dame Readers! Halloween is the perfect time of year to visit with Cherie Colyer, multi-talented and prolific author of middle-grade fantasies and adult novels.  

Today we're featuring this middle-grade (8-12)  fantasy:


          I had the privilege of reading this fun book. This is delightful for kids and adults alike. Atticus is a likable, kind, character, who finds himself in a bit of a bind.  This is a perfect choice if you're looking for a scary, but not too frightening, fantasy for a child or grandchild. Now on to Cherie:



What can you tell us about YOU that will allow us to get to know you better—where you live, your background, jobs, interests, etc.?

A few fun facts about me:


1.     I can’t start my day without a good cup of coffee. My mind just doesn’t wake up until I have caffeine in me.

2.     I work full-time in a technical job. A magic wand would come in handy most days.

3.     Every sorting hat test I’ve taken placed me in Gryffindor.

4.     I have a sixth sense that allows me to feel others’ emotions. It’s great when people are in a good mood. Not so much when they’re sad, but then I know when someone can use a little cheering up so it works out.

5.     I’m pretty sure I’ve seen faeries in my backyard. They’re welcome to visit anytime they’d like.

6.     I hate to sew, but I have a sewing machine.

7.     My guilty pleasure is curling up on the couch and binge-watching my favorite TV series. Some of my favorite shows include Friends, Charmed, Vampire Dairies, and Downton Abbey.

8.     I’m just as happy at home as I am with friends.

How and when did your writing journey begin?

I always enjoyed writing. When I was in grade school, I enjoyed writing essays. In high school, I wrote poems. But it wasn’t until I was an adult that I considered writing a book, and I have my husband to thank for the push. I used to tell him about ideas I had of fantasy creatures living in our world. One day, he asked me why I didn’t write a book. So, I decided to write down one of my ideas. I loved plotting and being the director of my characters’ lives so much that he got me my first laptop, went with me to hear other authors speak, and encouraged me to pursue publication. He’s a great guy.

What genre is your featured book? What do you like about writing in that genre?

Atticus Everheart, Fifth Grade Tutor and Monster Hunter? is a middle-grade, fantasy/mystery. It's Hotel Transylvania meets Sherlock Holmes, equal parts friendship, humor, and mystery.

As a reader, my go-to genre is middle-grade fantasy. Whenever I’m in a reading slump or want an escape from reality, I know I’ll find my escape between the pages of a middle-grade novel. The magic is bold, the dreams are big, and the adventures vivid, wild, and exciting. I love visiting the different worlds and seeing the wonders, the magic, and the friendships. Especially the friendships. So, for me, it wasn’t a surprise that the first book I penned was a middle-grade fantasy. That wasn’t Atticus’s story. His came many years later.

Describe your main character—life, personality, motivation—whatever you think will make us want to get to know the person.

That would be Atticus Everheart. There isn’t anything remarkable about Atticus. In fact, he’s about as ordinary as ordinary can get. He’s child number three out of five Everheart children, small for his age, and non-athletic. But being ordinary has never bothered him. He has his books (and sometimes his brothers’ special stash of books, but let’s keep that between us because his brothers hate when he touches their things) to entertain him. Atticus is happy as long as there is no mention of monsters. He would rather brave endless tea parties with his little sister, Evie. Or listen to his other sister, Abigail, go on and on about the things for sale in the newspaper (a guilty pleasure of hers for as long as Atticus can remember) before facing anything that might go bump in the night. His fear of monsters is his brothers’ fault. They’ve threatened to feed him to the beastly creatures on more than one occasion. Imagine his surprise when he goes to work for monsters!

 

If you could spend an afternoon with any of your secondary characters, who would it be and why?

This is a tough question, but if I can choose only one secondary character from Atticus book, I choose his younger sister Abigail. She’s smart, interesting, and has such a positive outlook. Plus, she’s also always with her little sister, Evie, who attacks situations in fun and imaginative ways.

What is your best advice for aspiring writers?

Read a lot and read wide. You’ll learn about flow, character development, plot, etc. 

A huge thanks to the ladies at Pen Dames for having me here today!

We’re so happy to have you, Cherie!


1.     Book Blurb for Atticus

Nothing frightens Atticus Everheart more than monsters, thanks to his older brothers, who often threaten to feed him to the beastly creatures.

Fearing that’s what they will do if he doesn’t replace the book he accidentally ruined, he takes a job tutoring a boy in his neighborhood.

Although nervous about the job, Atticus soon discovers there’s a lot more in store for him than teaching. Never in a trillion years would he have imagined he’d be hiding from monsters, working with ghosts, or searching for werewolves and witches. He’s not brave, and he has no plans to change.

Until he’s forced to.


S   Short Excerpt:

“Great day, isn’t it?” said Atticus as he trailed behind Frank.

“If you enjoy excessive sunshine,” grumbled the butler.

“Doesn’t everyone? You haven’t had enough caffeine yet, have you?” Frank shuffled down the hall, so Atticus rattled on. “My mom can’t handle conversation before her first cup. Dad usually needs two. Three if he has a busy day ahead of him.”

Frank stopped, turned, and glowered at Atticus.

“It’s a three-cup morning for you, isn’t it?” said Atticus. “No more chatter from me. No, sir. Starting now.” Atticus mimicked turning a key in front of his mouth.

Frank grunted and lumbered forward.

“This place is amazing.” Atticus stared openmouthed at the iron chandelier above them. “Are those real candles? Oops, sorry!” He relocked his lips with a second imaginary key.

In the absence of conversation, the creak of someone moving around upstairs and the slap of Atticus’ shoes hitting stone tile echoed off the walls. He made more noise than Frank, whose shoes were bigger than his, Abigail’s, and Evie’s combined. In an attempt to be just as quiet as Frank, Atticus trod lightly, making a conscious effort to place each foot down without making a sound.

To keep his mind off his collywobbles, he took in the collection of pictures nailed to the wall along the grand staircase. There were several of Ms. Zaleska and the boy with slick black hair. Mixed in with the color photographs were black-and-white pictures of Frank with a man in a lab coat and faded photos of a woman with kind eyes like Ms. Zaleska’s. Atticus stared at the photos, which seemed to stare back.

“No way,” he muttered, so distracted that he walked right into the suit of armor. The armor’s arm shifted, sending the long medieval poleaxe sailing straight for Atticus’s head.

Atticus screamed and ducked. When the sharp blade didn’t scalp him, he glanced up. Frank’s chubby fingers gripped the handle of the ax.

1.      Website /blog and social media links-

Website - https://cheriecolyer.com/

Instagram: www.instagram.com/cherie_colyer/ 

Goodreads: https://www.goodreads.com/author/show/21748654.C_L_Colyer

Amazon author page: https://www.amazon.com/C-L-Colyer/e/B09C6JPT3X/

Bookbub author page: https://www.bookbub.com/profile/cherie-colyer

1.     Buy links for Atticus Everheart:

Amazon: https://www.amazon.com/Atticus-Everheart-Fifth-Monster-Hunter/dp/1509246118/

Barnes & Noble:  https://www.barnesandnoble.com/w/atticus-everheart-fifth-grade-tutor-and-monster-hunter-c-l-colyer/1142093808

Apple: https://books.apple.com/us/book/atticus-everheart-fifth-grade-tutor-and-monster-hunter/id6443330146

Universal link: https://books2read.com/u/bzVLPE

Indie Bound: https://www.indiebound.org/search/book?keys=atticus+everheart+fifth+grade+tutor

Goodreads: https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/62309386-atticus-everheart-fifth-grade-tutor-and-monster-hunter

Bookbub:  https://www.bookbub.com/books/atticus-everheart-fifth-grade-tutor-and-monster-hunter-by-c-l-colyer

 

  

 



Monday, September 16, 2024

Pen Dames Pointers! Tips to Jazz Up Your Writing 2024-9-16

 


A passion of Pen Dames is to help other writers by sharing tips and insights we have learned along the way. We hope you will find the pointers beneficial to your writing process.


Barbara Cairns

I get lots of ideas but only a few of them get fleshed out from the bare minimum to a completed project. Sometimes, this involves research, which I love, to enhance the story with factual information interspersed throughout the story. Weaving a bit of history into my stories, either from research or from my own experiences and interactions, requires time and effort so as not to bog down the story itself. I try to focus on getting readers to empathize with my characters by including details about their daily lives and the places they inhabit.




Jennifer Taylor

As you likely know, writing a book is a bit of a marathon. And like any marathon (although I've never run one!), it's very important to pace yourself and to take a rest when your body tells you.  Fiction writing is the same. Let's say you have been working for a couple of hours (let me just say that physical therapists recommend getting out of your chair every forty-five minutes). Your mind is spinning its wheels and going nowhere. I have two words for you: POWER NAP! Get up, walk around, and lean back in your favorite chair. Set the timer for, say, fifteen minutes, and breathe deeply. 

Diaphragmatic breathing is an important skill to use for many reasons. It's how babies naturally breathe. It's a technique singers use to maximize their power. Take a look at a YouTube video. Once you get the hang of it, you won't be sorry. It will help you relax as you close your eyes and try to empty your mind.  If little squirrel thoughts scamper across your mind, sweep them away. Maybe with this meditation, you'll fall asleep. If your alarm goes off, enjoy your nap. You probably need it.

I find that when I use this technique, it refreshes me and I'm once again ready for action. 
Happy writing!

Flossie Benton Rogers

Revision Task – Examine the Character Roster

You have typed THE END! After a well-deserved celebration and rest, many other tasks must be performed on your way to publication. Among these is revision. One facet of revision is assessing your lineup of characters. Look closely at each one on the roster. Does each serve a unique purpose in your story? Are the characters distinguishable from one another? Are one or more unnecessary? Does it make sense to combine minor characters? Writing too many characters is a common occurrence, since you may not know all of your plot, or who is necessary to carry it out, until you get into the thick of writing.
 
This happened recently with my cozy mystery in progress. Two stalwart women are icons of the town. Each one has a son around the same age. When I started the novel, I had thought Woman A was the murderer. It turned out later that – no – the murderer was Woman B. Part of the thinking process is to determine the roles of the sons. Obviously, the son of Woman B will have more at stake than the son of Woman A. Is the son of Woman A necessary to the plot or is he redundant? In this case he was clearly redundant, and I moved him off the canvas. The fact that he was so easily removed illustrates how redundant he was. If he’s needed in a later novel of this same series, then at that time he can “return from overseas,” Woman A’s son who lived elsewhere and now comes back to his hometown. I don’t have to say anything about him in the current book, unless I want to set up the plot for the next book in the series. 

Don’t fret about combining or even eliminating a redundant character. Let him live in your “to be used later--maybe” file.

Loretta C. Rogers

How to Begin Your Story

Figuring out where to start telling your story is one of the bigger challenges most writers face. You have limited time and space—a few pages, at most—to seize your readers’ interest. If you start too slowly and include too much of the characters’ history, readers may get tired of waiting for the interesting stuff to start. If you start too fast, with too much action, they may get confused. Either miscalculation can make a reader put the book down and never pick it up again.




A Good Rule of Thumb for Starting Your Novel with a Bang!


1. Startle readers with the first line. 
2. Begin at a life-changing moment. 
3. Create intrigue about the characters. 
4. Use a setting as the inciting incident. 
5. Up the stakes within the first few pages. 
6. Introduce something ominous right away. 
7. Set the mood. 
8. Make your characters sympathetic — and relatable — immediately.

Katherine Eddinger Smits


The Dreaded Synopsis: How to Ease the Pain


Crafting a compelling synopsis is an essential skill for any author. However, it's common for writers to confuse a synopsis with a back cover blurb, leading to frustration and missed opportunities.

Let's Clear the Confusion:

A synopsis is not a back cover blurb.

The back cover blurb is designed to tease and entice potential readers. It offers just enough plot details to spark curiosity, often including comparisons to similar books, provocative questions, and sometimes even glowing review quotes. It avoids spoilers and doesn’t reveal the book’s ending.

So, What Exactly is a Synopsis?
A synopsis is a detailed summary of your entire book, covering the main characters, major plot points, and key information. It's a crucial part of your submission package when querying traditional publishers or literary agents, and it’s often required for writing contests. Unlike the blurb, the synopsis must include the ending.

Why Include the Ending in a Synopsis?
Publishers, agents, and contest judges rely on the synopsis to get a full understanding of your story. They don’t have time to read every manuscript cover-to-cover, so they depend on a concise, one- or two-page summary to make decisions. A well-written synopsis provides a clear picture of the entire plot, including how it all resolves, helping industry professionals determine if your book is worth pursuing.

How to Write a Synopsis:
Many writers dread writing a synopsis, finding it challenging to distill an 80,000+ word novel into a page or two. But it’s a necessary step, and with the right approach, it can be done effectively.

Here are some tips to make the process smoother:

Format: Use present tense, third-person point of view, and a 12-point font. Aim for about 250 to 300 words.
Introduction: Start with a brief overview of the genre, time period, and setting. Mention key tropes.
Main Characters: Write a paragraph about the protagonist, including their name, what makes them unique, their primary goal, and the stakes if they fail. If you're writing a romance, add a similar paragraph for the love interest. For thrillers or other genres with a significant antagonist, include a paragraph about the villain as well.
Plot Summary: Identify the major plot points, such as the inciting incident, call to action, midpoint, all-is-lost moment, climax, and resolution. Condense each of these into a single sentence, then expand those sentences into short paragraphs as needed to include only the most important information without going into too much detail.
Process: If you’re a plotter, use your outline as a guide. If you’re more of a pantser, pull the key moments directly from your manuscript.

Pro Tip: Consider writing your synopsis before drafting your novel. It can serve as a roadmap, keeping you focused and helping you overcome writer’s block if you become stuck.

Whether you’re just starting out, revising your manuscript, or preparing to publish, a well-crafted synopsis is a vital tool in your journey to success.

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