Thursday, April 3, 2025

Pen Dames Pointers! Tips to Jazz Up Your Writing 2025-4-3


 


A passion of Pen Dames is to help other writers by sharing tips and insights we have learned along the way. We hope you will find the pointers beneficial to your writing process.

Katherine Eddinger Smits


Seven Reasons Why Authors Should Judge Contests

Have you ever considered judging a writing contest? I regularly judge for the Florida Writers Association Royal Palm Literary Awards. When I was invited to judge, I felt honored but unsure of my qualifications. However, I decided to give it a try, and I’m so happy I did! Here are some compelling reasons why you should consider it too:

1. Giving Back to the Writing Community

Every writer benefits from the support of others—whether through writing associations, critique groups, or informal networking. A rising tide lifts all boats, and by helping fellow writers, we strengthen the literary community as a whole. Judging a contest is a meaningful way to give back, offering aspiring authors valuable feedback that can improve their work.

2. Sharpening Your Own Writing Skills

It’s easier to recognize strengths and weaknesses in someone else’s writing than in our own. By evaluating multiple entries, you become more aware of what makes a story effective—or where it falls short. Contest rubrics require judges to analyze elements such as plot, pacing, character development, and premise with precision. Providing constructive, example-based critiques is challenging but invaluable. With every evaluation, you deepen your understanding of the craft, sometimes more than in formal writing classes.

3. Enhancing Your Writing Credentials

Adding “Contest Judge” to your resume or bio is a valuable distinction. It demonstrates industry involvement, a strong grasp of storytelling mechanics, and the ability to critically assess writing. For editors, agents, and publishers, this experience is just as noteworthy as publication credits.

4. Expanding Industry Connections

Judging contests introduces you to fellow authors, contest organizers, and industry professionals. These connections can lead to new opportunities, such as speaking engagements, panel invitations, or collaborative projects. The more you engage in the literary world, the more doors open.

5. Learning What Makes a Story Stand Out

When you evaluate multiple submissions side by side, patterns emerge. You start to see what captures attention and what makes an entry fall flat. This perspective is invaluable when preparing your own submissions, helping you craft stories that resonate with readers and judges alike.

6. Boosting Confidence in Critical Analysis

Assessing contest entries strengthens your ability to evaluate writing objectively. As you practice giving clear, constructive feedback, you’ll gain confidence in critiquing your own work with the same discerning eye.

7. Finding Inspiration for Your Own Writing

Exposure to different storytelling techniques, genres, and voices can spark fresh ideas. Sometimes, a unique premise or an interesting narrative choice in someone else’s work might inspire a new approach in your own projects.

Judging a contest isn’t just about helping others—it’s about growing as a writer and becoming more engaged in the literary world. If you ever get the opportunity, take it. You might be surprised at how much you gain from the experience!


Barbara Cairns

Creativity

Did you know that as creative people, we are known as ambiverts? That means that unlike most people who are either introverts or extroverts, we combine both personality types, being both expressive and withdrawn, sociable and quiet. We are fortunate to be not only creative right brain thinkers, but also analytical and logical left brain thinkers.

Our common characteristics include the following: curiosity, playfulness, open mindedness, flexibility, independence, risk taking, sensitivity, intuition, attention to detail, ambition, objectivity, and perhaps most of all, passion.

Albert Einstein stated that “Creativity is intelligence having fun.” But, we writers know that it can also be challenging, ambiguous, and often discouraging. We must be motivated and have self-confidence. It takes a great deal of effort and persistence to maintain creativity.

Creativity comes in many forms. Whether it’s painting, writing, playing a musical instrument, it’s the ability to produce original ideas, themes or techniques that are useful and adaptable.

Being creative is good for our brains. We all know that lots of things are good for brain training such as reading, working puzzles, getting enough exercise and sleep and eating healthy foods. But the arts also should be added to that list. Writing, playing a musical instrument, drawing, painting, dancing…all these creative activities can benefit us. Practicing or just enjoying the arts can change your brain and your behavior. Those changes can improve both mental and emotional health.

Creative energy is a reflection of who we are, the sum total of all the bits and pieces we’ve collected throughout the years. Our creative projects have evolved from filled notebooks, photos, audio files, clippings, highlighted book passages, notes and articles, snippets from conversations, images of art, advice from mentors, lessons from nature and spiritual connections.

We can rejoice as creative people, knowing that we are innovative, inventive, imaginative, talented, gifted, original, ingenious, trailblazing, groundbreaking, and pioneering visionaries. According to research, creativity involves “a complex interplay between spontaneous and controlled thinking.”

Maya Angelou reminds us with this quote: “You can’t use up creativity. The more you use, the more you have.” So, my fellow writers, keep that creativity going!


Jennifer Taylor

Keep Them Reading!

A very wise and talented mentor, Loretta Rogers (part of the Pen Dames!), once spoke of using television as a way to help with pacing and plot. If I'm not mistaken, she suggested observing a show that's in the genre you're writing. Isn't it inevitable that the scene ends for a commercial at a suspenseful part? So you have to watch when the commercial is over. Likewise, each scene and chapter in your book must end with the reader wondering what's going to happen next. 

Another example: I am in the process of working on a Rom-Com. There are doctors and nurses in the story, so I have been carefully watching the very funny comedy, Scrubs. I take note of the sight gags, the one-liners, and the way the scene ends, usually with something funny that makes you keep watching. It's very helpful. The characters are complex, with history and their own unique quirks. 

Thanks again, Loretta, for your suggestion--years ago!--and a shoutout to all the Pen Dames.


Flossie Benton Rogers

Character Response to Loss

As loss elicits various reactions in real life, so should it for the characters we write. Almost every character will have suffered some degree of loss and grief, from small to overwhelming. Does time actually heal all wounds or does dealing with loss bring about a constant recalibration of a person and how he or she responds to life forever after? Does a catastrophic loss suffered years ago change the way your character deals with certain ordinary situations? Does it bring forth traits that weren’t in evidence before or cause formerly observable traits to now be completely closed off? Does your character’s behavior change according to various challenges met during the course of the book or series?

Whether you approach such questions overtly in your story or consider them as background and backdrop, how your character responds can add layers of complexity and authenticity.

In my cozy mystery WIP, Pumpkin Patch Murder, the heroine’s backstory includes the loss of her brother in war, compounded by the death of her parents. Some of the changes to her behavior include a reluctance to enter hospitals and an avoidance of her old hometown and the memories associated with it. There are also hints of a lack of commitment and a tendency toward a rudderless life. Her main interests are studying history and leading cemetery tours, but her unusual ability to communicate with spirits has, thus far, provided little inner satisfaction.

In the book she is challenged to return to her hometown, take charge of a landmark tearoom under renovation, and use her unusual ability to help solve a murder. I look forward to seeing how her response to loss develops and changes during subsequent books in the series. How does grief or loss affect the current focal character you’re writing or reading about?


Loretta C. Rogers

Why Research is Crucial to Writing

Not all writers are naturally drawn to research, and some may find it tedious or uninspiring, especially if the topic doesn't genuinely spark the writer’s interest.

However, authors must remember they are writing for a wide range of audiences. Readers are smart. They can tell when a writer has threaded accurate research throughout their story in a believable way, or when a writer hasn’t researched at all. The trick is to be sure the information doesn’t read as regurgitation from an encyclopedia.

No matter the genre, from Historical to Sci-fi, Mystery to Romance, research is crucial to writing because it ensures accuracy, inspires creativity, ultimately leading to more compelling and impactful writing. Research also helps create more authentic and believable characters, settings, and narratives.

Lastly, create a ‘research’ file. Save the url’s for each researched topic. Creating such a file can be a valuable source, and a time-saver when writing about previously used topics e.g. horses, weaponry, certain countries, flora or fauna, and other relevant information.


Did these suggestions resonate with you? Let us know, and also tell us of any writing questions you have and topics you’d like us to cover in these Pointers.
Thanks for stopping by, and happy writing! Cheers from the Pen Dames.

Pen Dames Pointers! Tips to Jazz Up Your Writing 2025-4-3

  A passion of Pen Dames is to help other writers by sharing tips and insights we have learned along the way. We hope you will find the poin...